Rejected Excalibur - Expert

[Uncrypted]

Build: Uncrypted

Map name: Excalibur​

Difficulty: Expert

Jumps: 78

Checkpoints: 6

Command (second plot): /plot v uncrypted 2

Testers: BluePottwal, Xniper03, JustBudge, CHORDILABEBE, ComradeOlaf, frsz, caseyclosed, and CheesyPeanutXL

Pictures:

Outside
https://prnt.sc/1296ip6
https://prnt.sc/1296k67
https://prnt.sc/1296lyy
https://prnt.sc/1296nfp
https://prnt.sc/1296opg

Inside the rock
https://prnt.sc/1296e5u
https://prnt.sc/1296g7e​

 

[Tas]

Looks cool but really heavily worldedit-y with spheres and such, I'd recommend trying to smooth out the rocks and arms a little

 

[tRWUurga724kuKSr]

rose

 

[tRWUurga724kuKSr]

maybe i would remove this checkpoint by the fact there is one like 5jumps after (+ failsafe lol)

 

[DionysosITheIGod]

:/

 

[Anacoustic]

Hi there Uncrypted,

Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.

The THEME of the map is original so good on you for that !

The BUILD feels unfinished and needs some work with the worldedit. The terraforming looks very very blocky and the organic itself looks very worldedited. Try to smoothen the edges out and there is no head on the build... was there supposed to be ?

The PARKOUR is fitting length of an expert but is very inconsistent. At some portions, jumps were way too hard while at others they were way too easy. Please try to make sure your parkour flows well together. Also, the part on the sword seems unfinished and may need several directions. Also make sure to check your facings.. your map is facing in the incorrect direction.

Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day !

-Ana