Rejected Expert Chest parkour: Made by Panda and TheSleepMart

[Bushy]

this map has a few chests that you can go into and parkour around. You will face some very challenging jumps and you will also have to look around a bit to find where to go at places.
This map has 154 jumps and 4 checkpoints.

Location: /warp PandaChest

 

[The_Jazzy_Man]

Nicely done! It makes a nice partner to the other big build maps of minecraft blocks that have been made lately!

 

[Billybo10000]

I'm not sure what to think. It's obvious that design-wise, this parkour looks stunning. However, from a gameplay standpoint, a lot of the initial gimmicks are a little weak. For example, a lot of your slime block jumps are tough to get working and I had far too many moments where the jumping did not trigger.

I feel a revision of the gameplay section of your map needs revising.

 

[Bushy]

I'm not sure what to think. It's obvious that design-wise, this parkour looks stunning. However, from a gameplay standpoint, a lot of the initial gimmicks are a little weak. For example, a lot of your slime block jumps are tough to get working and I had far too many moments where the jumping did not trigger.

I feel a revision of the gameplay section of your map needs revising.

So you want me to edit which parts? and which slimes are you talking about, the ones inside the chest, or the end ones

 

[Billybo10000]

The chest parts. For now, I'm rejecting the course. Re-submit it another time when it is more clear and presentable from a gameplay standpoint.