Hey there, elisepuppy21
Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
Theme: Your theme, you chose a fallen sky kingdom but it looks quite similar to 'olympus' type parkour map submissions, as they have the same type of building look and blocks used.
Build: Your build, it's quite basic and doesn't really have any significant noticeable detail to it sadly, you only really used one block type to make most of your build which gives it quite a simplistic look, I recommend you also scale your build larger as it's quite small from my view.
Parkour: Your parkour, first thing I noticed is the variety, you used a couple of blocks for your parkour but I didn't really notice any interesting parkour jumps or blocks incorporated into your build which made it feel pretty bland and repetitive from my point of view, I suggest adding more interesting and sophisticated blocks for future.
Thanks for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord.