Rejected Farm Life

[Octupli]

Username: Octupli
Map Name: Farm Life
Warp: /plot v Octupli
Difficulty: Medium probably, maybe a tough easy

Hi! I'm Octupli, back with another map submission! This map is about living on a farm. You parkour through the four seasons to simulate what happens on a real farm. I didn't see any others like it, but I may have missed something... I hope not! Anyway, enjoy!!!!

 

[IPattyI]

Hey Octupli,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have our fair share of seasons/farm-related maps currently on our server, this is an unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: Due to the floating aspect and blandness of it, the build is not very good. It's just floating islands that differ minimally. Nothing was executed very well and it's not something we haven't seen before. It's not very original or attractive.
• Parkour: The parkour's difficulty was more suited for the easy difficulty but the length was more suited to the medium difficulty. So, you either cut back on some jumps or buff the overall difficulty of the map. Furthermore, I found the parkour to be quite boring to do. This is due to the repetitive nature of it. For example, from summer to autumn it was all fences and from autumn to winter it was all ice. It's just not very enjoyable to do, you need to use a wider variety of blocks/jumps.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!