Rejected Feel Good Inc. - Medium

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Username: elvany
Map Name: Feel Good Inc.
Plot: /plot visit elvany 1
Difficulty: Medium
Jumps: 53
Checkpoints: 3
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Map based on the windmill island in the music video for 'Feel Good Inc.' by Gorillaz.

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Hello elvany,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around a windmill (WindMill). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build is accurate for what you are going for but is a bit plain. Next time try considering adding extra details and block texture to further create an attractive build.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, slabs, and fences. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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