Rejected FireTurtle's Mesa Islands

[FireTurtle338]

Map Maker - FireTurtle338
Difficulty - Easy
Jumps - About 32 Jumps
Plot Teleport - /plot tp FireTurtle338 1
Map Name - Mesa Islands (I was also considering the name, "Mesa Mine", so the map name may change)

Theme - Modified Biome (?)
Version Built In - 1.8.9 Badlion Client w/Optifine
Checkpoints - 3

I checked to make sure this map would be original, and found another Mesa map. I played the map and quickly realized that it was different from mine. There was also a Gold Mine map I'm pretty sure, and I think I did a decent job of making this map original enough. I don't know if the name is very fitting, so any suggestions would be nice. I think I managed to make a sturdy variation of parkour throughout the course. I made sure to not make the jumps to difficult, but if there are any jumps you'd like me to make easier, I will. I don't know if this was just my computer lagging, but in between the mineshaft island and gold island, for some reason I got Slow Falling and I couldn't jump. I tried relogging but it just kept coming back. I believe all the jumps within that area are possible, but I'm not 100%. I saw something that banned single iron bars, but I don't understand if it was just for parkour or decorations as well. I think I blocked off all escapes/shortcuts.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello FireTurtle338,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is somewhat original, there are a lot of floating island themed maps, but none of mesa biomes which is good.
The build is good, it's built nicely and has some good details, so well done!
The parkour is quite repetitive. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when building maps, as well as the way you utilize these, as this will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
A lot of the parkour is floating. I know it's difficult as there isn't a whole lot of room in the build to put parkour into, but having an excessive number of jumps floating around your build and the void can make your map look a bit messy.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.