Rejected Flying Islands - Easy

[64TheStack]

Username: 64TheStack
Map Name: Flying Islands
Warp: /visit plot 64TheStack 2
Difficulty: Easy

 

[IPattyI]

Hey LucyTheKnighty,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have an overabundance of floating island-related maps currently on our server, this is a very unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: I'm really not a fan of the build as it's just floating islands with no originality, focus, or detail. It's just all not very appealing to the eyes due to the lack of proper execution of the aforementioned. The islands just have odd shapes and minimal/effortless things on them. I know you can do better.
• Parkour: The parkour definitely fit the easy difficulty, it was easy and short. But, that doesn't mean it was very good. I say this because it felt very repetitive to do as you didn't utilize a wide variety of jumps/blocks. It was just a lot of ladders. That wasn't very enjoyable to do. Think of expanding your variety in the future to prevent such linearity.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!