Rejected "FM" - Medium (Resubmission)

_Kamakiriad_ · Nov 20, 2020

Map Name: "FM"
Map Maker: _Kamakiriad_ (Tested by zrsr)
Warp: /plot visit _Kamakiriad_ 2
Difficulty: Medium
# of Jumps: 65

IPattyI · Dec 10, 2020

Hey _Kamakiriad_,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

Theme: As I mentioned before, there are no issues with the theme.
Build: Correct me if I'm wrong, but I barely see any difference build-wise between this submission and your previous one. Which is the exact same thing I told you then as well. You didn't address the blandness and unattractiveness of the build. You have to fix the ground, the tower, the trees, etc. It has to be polished up if you want it to be in an acceptable state.
Parkour: The only difference I saw with the parkour was the addition of the interior tree portion. Even though it fits difficulty-wise (although it feels long), it's just not very enjoyable. It feels pretty uninventive and straightforward (take the tower part for example). This must also be addressed if you want your map to get accepted.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck