Rejected "FM" - Medium

_Kamakiriad_ · May 25, 2020

Map Name: FM
Map Maker: _Kamakiriad_ (Tested by zrsr)
Warp: /plot visit _Kamakiriad_ 2
Difficulty: Medium

IPattyI · Jun 4, 2020

Hey _Kamakiriad_,

It pains me to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED.

Theme: The theme is most definitely original as we have no "Radio", "Radio Tower", or "FM" themed maps currently on the server. I really do enjoy your attempt on the theme, it's new and creative.
Build: The build is okay. I can see that you put a lot of effort into it, there's no doubt about that. But, there are definitely some areas you could improve on. The ground is just flat grass/dirt, the trees are generic, and the radio tower could use some more work.
Parkour: The PK's difficulty definitely fits the medium difficulty but it was way too long, I recommend you shorten it. Furthermore, I felt as if the parkour was incredibly linear and repetitive. Try to incorporate a variety of jumps/blocks into your parkour so that it's enjoyable to do. And, it was incredibly confusing (especially the end, so please add signs to help the player).

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!