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Hey ogg,
Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
- Theme: Although the map "WritingUtensils" features a pen (among other things), its approach to the theme and build is quite different from your map. Therefore, your map is most definitely originally themed.
- Build: Personally, I think the build was not very well-executed. In all honesty, the build just doesn't look like a fountain pen to me. At first glance, it just looked like a test tube. The block choices and shaping must be worked on if you want this to be at an acceptable state.
- Parkour: The parkour was fitting for the medium difficulty in all regards. Although, I felt that the parkour was rather repetitive. One too many times there were segments with very similar jumps/blocks, leading to one getting bored quite quickly (corner jumps, ladder jumps, or just basic 1b/2b block jumps). Try to incorporate a wider variety of jumps and/or blocks (that make sense) into your parkour !
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