Hello Blurpyfied,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The parkour is still an issue. A lot of the variation feels forced, and the block choices really don't fit in with your build or theme. In addition to this, the difficulty of your map is still quite inconsistent. (No blips on experts, please.) In addition to this, the medium pressure plate is unnecessary and the actual map finish should be more visible.
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!