Rejected Gears-Easy

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LovelyLing

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Hello! When taking the screenshots, you should take them of the whole build. That makes it easier to see the entire project.
 

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Hello JudahOMG,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there is already a "Gears' map (Gears - Insane) Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't great, as it is quite flat and you didn't use much variety in blocks. I would suggest trying to add more shape and depth to the build, as well as trying to add more detail where possible.
The parkour is quite repetitive, as you mainly used ladders. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when creating maps, this will overall make your map more enjoyable to complete.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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