Rejected Goomba - Easy

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/plot home Blurpyfied 5
Easy, 25 jumps 3 checkpoints.

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Hello Blurpyfied,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.
 

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Hello Blurpyfied,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The overall shape of your build is what we're looking for, so well done there. However, some details need to be improved. The head should curve more gently to resemble an actual Goomba. The feet and teeth could use more details as well (maybe utilize some stairs.) There also could be more done with the interior of the map.
The parkour is inconsistent; there are some jumps that don't flow well with the rest of the map, and I'll put more examples below:
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The rest of the parkour just did not feel fun to play, so make sure you make it flow better and have more variation.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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