Rejected Goomba - Easy

[Blurpyfied]

Made By: BLurpyfied & BluePottwal
Jumps: 24
Checkpoints: 3
/plot home Blurpyfied 5 (back left)
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[k_rissy]

Hello Blurpyfied and BluePottwal,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Blurpyfied and BluePottwal,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.

The build is the best it has been so far. However, there are still some concerns.
-The head should be rounded out more, rather than just looking very square-like
-The interior could also have more details, looks odd at the moment

The parkour also has a few additional issues.

Spoiler: Jumps

The green path- all these jumps are too precise given how they are angled.
White circle- Barrier needs to be properly marked (a white glass block is recommended.)

Better variation could be used in this interior. The ice to slime jump is also precise.

These jumps are also precise for the difficulty.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!