Rejected GOOMBELLA [medium PK]

[dogi]

so i realised that tere will be a Nintendo section and i made one carácter from the paper mario series:
goombella (you dont have ARMS BTW) from TTYD
details:
62 jumps
1 checkpoints
médium PK
do /warp goombella to check it out (its goombela not goombella i messed up)
images:

i changed the eye possision to make it look more like in the game also the tooth was moved

 

[dogi]

turns out the warp isnt /warp goombella
its /warp goombela
UPS

 

[Lamont]

I have not played paper Mario. I will go to GameStop to buy it. Nice work!

 

[Billybo10000]

Sadly your map has been rejected!

Like the last few maps, you have not improved with your decisions on which blocks to use for building. Your map does not please from a design point because you use such rough blocks. Stone for the helmet was a bad decision when you had access to the two grey wools and the iron block. The pink wool for skin could be swapped out for white stained clay for skin colour, or even pink stained clay.

Due to these issues, the parkour does not look very nice and feels very unpolished. However, the eyes and the extra tooth were a good touch.

~ Billy