Rejected Gramophone - medium

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Username: Wont_
Map name: Gramophone
Difficulty: medium
Jumps: about 64
tp: /plot visit Wont_ 2

ps. at the end there are 2 floating jumps because I really didnt know how the let the course end otherwise, I hope it isnt a huge problem :)
Also have fun looking at my map
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Heya Wont_!

Just going to be giving my opinion here; keep in mind that I am not a map judge.

Alrighty, my first impression of this map was that it looks great, I love the attention to detail and the colour variation, especially on the box at the base, The use of the spruce and dark oak really brings it to life.

In regards to the BUILD overall, it matches the theme perfectly and is full of detail. Great work on this!

The THEME (to my knowledge, and checking the map document) is unique, which is great as well! I love the theme and the way you've executed it, good job on this.

The PARKOUR matches the difficulty in most places, meaning that the difficulty is a little inconsistent in some areas. I would advise you to revise some areas and make sure that the jumps are similarly difficult to other medium maps. The variation is good throughout, fluid and smooth to parkour on, good work on this.

Other than this, the map is good and I wish you all the best with the submission process!
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Hi there! This map looks fantastic!I love the build, the theme is unique, and the parkour is good also! I am not a map judge, so my opinions are not official of course. Good luck!!!
 

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Hello Wont_,

I will be putting your map in ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Please be patient as I discuss your map with the map judging team.

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
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Hello Wont_,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around this (Recordplayer). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is good. It is accurate for what you are going for with nice details and shaping.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking your time to submit your map, I hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Elly
 
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