Rejected H-ore-ibble - Easy

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Username: MilesNotMeters
Map Name: H-ore-ibble
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Plot Number 2.
Difficulty - Easy. Although there is one neo jump near the beginning.
Number of Jumps: 32
 

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This is going to be a -1 from me. I’m not sure how I feel about the theme because there are a lot of mining-themed maps but ore-themed I don’t know, so I’ll let others decide on that. The build itself is where I find my main issues: most of the parkour is floating (not connected to a main build) because there isn’t a main build. The cube of ore doesn’t look fantastic but it works for what you are trying to do. Try to make the blocks a little more diverse as the vast majority of your blocks are Diamond blocks. I am currently lying in bed so I can’t speak for the parkour, but I don’t believe that neos are generally wanted in easy maps (I could be wrong, map judging is always changing).

Good luck on this map and future map submissions!
 

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Hello,

I'm very sorry to inform you that your map has unfortunately been rejected due to the reasons that we already have many "Ore" related maps on ManaCube, and by now, the theme is very unoriginal, there also isn't really a main build to it, as well as a lot of the parkour being floating. The parkour length and jumps do fit the difficulty you're going for, but it's also very repetitive.

In the future when creating maps, please refer to the official parkour list (with theme) here: https://www.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ , I also strongly recommend that you have a "main" build to your creations, for example like this:
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(Waluigi by Shinxray)

As well as attaching your parkour to the actual build, as we frown upon floating parkour, and lastly, please vary your blocks for your jumps throughout your map creations! I personally recommend jumps like ice, soul sand, fences, glass, chests, cake, brewing stands, etc!

Thank you for taking the time to create, and submit this map. I hope to see lots more of you in the future!
Luci x
 
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