Rejected Halloween Paradise

[Its_Donut]

Username - Its_Donut
Map Name - Halloween Paradise
Warp - /plot home Its_Donut 3
Difficulty - Medium or Hard
Number of jumps - about 85 jumps.
Photos of map -
https://gyazo.com/309396e1785b6ebf00ad3d351b02bfd1
https://gyazo.com/55306bc51845cd19e76642fb46a876d0
https://gyazo.com/ab6b98bbe2e0932f3985c2191a11e1c0
https://gyazo.com/a11dd085c0ff72bc7fb6ed15710b1f50
https://gyazo.com/1fd705115fceafb6eeec0e20c2723d2b

 

[ynna]

hi, i'm quinn, aka spilltheteaasis.

decoration/build
i really like the builds and decorations, although I think you should put fewer cobwebs. the builds really suit the theme and its good. +1

parkour
i don't really like the parkour, the jumps are a bit easy, and you should make them a little harder. also, they aren't varied, with the same ladder jumps all the time. -0.5

this leaves you with a +0.5. i hope this map gets accepted! best of luck.

 

[AlfieJay]

-1

Personally I think the parkour is good and enjoyable. However some of the builds look really artificial and bad to look at. On top of that there's a part which I'm pretty sure is impossible. Please remember that the parkour must be possible in 1.8.9.

Just to clarify, this is NOT an automatic rejection but just my opinion ;D

 

[Its_Donut]

-1

Personally I think the parkour is good and enjoyable. However some of the builds look really artificial and bad to look at. On top of that there's a part which I'm pretty sure is impossible. Please remember that the parkour must be possible in 1.8.9.

Just to clarify, this is NOT an automatic rejection but just my opinion ;D

Thank you for the response! But can please tell me which jump // jumps are impossible? I built this map in 1.8.9 and I made sure I made it to where jumps are possible.

 

[Its_Donut]

hi, i'm quinn, aka spilltheteaasis.

decoration/build
i really like the builds and decorations, although I think you should put fewer cobwebs. the builds really suit the theme and its good. +1

parkour
i don't really like the parkour, the jumps are a bit easy, and you should make them a little harder. also, they aren't varied, with the same ladder jumps all the time. -0.5

this leaves you with a +0.5. i hope this map gets accepted! best of luck.

Thank you for the response :D !

 

[AlfieJay]

Thank you for the response! But can please tell me which jump // jumps are impossible? I built this map in 1.8.9 and I made sure I made it to where jumps are possible.

Either the jump is impossible or it's unclear where to go. Either way should be edited in some way :/

https://prnt.sc/l4mhf1

 

[Its_Donut]

Either the jump is impossible or it's unclear where to go. Either way should be edited in some way :/

https://prnt.sc/l4mhf1

Alright sorry, totally forgot to redo the pumpkin at that point, but I general I changed the jumps there, thank you for pointing that out !

 

[Aloro]

Hey, I am sorry to say but will be rejecting this map submission.
You had a nice idea for the map but it was unoriginal for parkour. The parkour was relatively easy for the hard difficulty, and then also too long to be a medium. I also found it was a little repetitive too. As said above the pumpkin felt artificial, seems to be done with world edit too. Last thing, one jump was not possible in the 1.8 versions so please be careful when making maps!
Thanks for the map submission, hope to see more in the future!

Spoiler: Impossible Jump (1.8)

http://prntscr.com/l7id2a