Rejected "Harry Potter Pt 2" by TheRoboMan

[TheRoboMan]

Username: "TheRoboMan"
Map name: "Harry Potter Pt 2"
how to get there: cmd "/plot tp TheRoboMan"
difficulty expert
jumps 120 or under

putting pictures in this is broken. i cant do it for some reason. file size is under 2mb.

i basically built it all myself. some people helped with some parkour jump stuff and details. you can see who in the enterance of the map.

 

[Shinxray]

(Before starting, I just want to say that I've judged without payng attention the second part on your other submission, so this review is for the 1st part of your map !)
Hoi TheRoboMan,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is pretty fine, even if there is already some maps with the same theme. The build could be better, some parts of your build are pretty nice, like the dragon, but it's still pretty unattractive in global, and pretty messy, because all your map is scattered in some little build, try to make one main build in your maps ! The parkour is not really good, it's repetitive, and really long for an expert, but way too easy for an insane, after your map is a bit varied.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !