Hello helfishii,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme and build are a bit hard to identify what they are supposed to be. Make sure you pick a more clear theme/build in future submissions.
The parkour is a bit repetitive throughout, so make sure that you use different types of jumps throughout your entire map. The parkour also gets confusing a bit throughout, so make sure that you have directional indicators (signs/heads) so players know where they are supposed to go.
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!