Rejected Hockey Rink - Medium

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VGAce and Cybercraft87
Hockey Rink
/plot v VGAce 2
Medium
42 jumps and 3 checkpoints
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Hello VGAce and Cybercraft87,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is a bit unoriginal, as we already have one map with a hockey theme (IceHockey.) This map is executed a bit differently, however, so good job on that!
The build is accurate to how a hockey rink would look in real life. There is also a decent amount of block variety used throughout this entire build, and it is attractive, so good job on that!
The parkour is quite repetitive with the use of straightforward jumps. I recommend incorporating different jump styles throughout your entire map! You can look at recently accepted maps for some examples of these! The banners are a bit unique, and they are incorporated with your build; however, they severely alter the visibility, and make the course a bit more difficult. Try to reduce the amount of banners. The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps both fit the medium difficulty quite nicely, so good job on that!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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