Rejected IceCloud - Easy

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zzykrkv

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Hi, I have a suggestion for your map. There needs to be a much more solid build. In your case the build is seemingly non-existent, if not barely recognizable, which is a problem as manacube requires a map to have a main build to it. If you look at some newer maps, you'll see what I mean. They all have one big build with parkour integrated into that.
 

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Heya,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around ice/snow. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. There isn't a main build, it is just floating blocks. Next time try considering creating one main build with lots of depth and detail.

The PARKOUR fits the difficulty of a easy map for the most part, so good job on that! There are a couple jumps that felt to hard (ex. the ice headhitter to long jump). Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, ladders and slime. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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