Rejected Icy Islands

[ZephyrMist]

Username: Zephyr_Mist
Map name: Icy Islands
Photos of your Parkour:

The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: /plot v Zephyr_Mist
Difficulty: Medium
Number of jumps: 47

Note: I figured out we shouldn't have floating jumps after I built the map, so I tried to reduce them... Sorry!

 

[Blurpyfied]

-1 unoriginal

 

[r3dstraw]

The Theme is Unoriginal
Because There are alot of Biomes Or Icy related Maps.
The Build isn't good and it doesn't look interesting.
Try to add more Details To ur build.
Also it looks Unatractive and messy Because there are too many floating jumps.
The Parkour is pretty boring and repetitive.
Next time try to add fences,Iron Bars, Ladder, Vines, Water And all other Stuff.
Also a bit too easy for a Medium.

I Wish You Good Luck! :)

 

[ZephyrMist]

Thanks! I'll definitally work on that if I make another map, especially since I know the requirements this time

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi Zephyr_Mist,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is not really original, because there is already some "Ice" themed maps already, be careful next time ! The build is not really good too, it's pretty messy, and not really attractive, because there is a lot of floating jumps, try to build your map on/in a main build. The parkour could be better, it's a bit varied, but I still think it's a bit repetitive, because there is a lot of normal jumps in a row.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !