Rejected Impending Injury - Hard (revised)

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Cashisgr8

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-Impending Injury

Original Thread with original screenshots:
https://www.manacube.com/threads/impending-injury-hard.52652/

Updates:
-The mass of barriers in the early checkpoints has been removed, and the parkour has been changed to flow more freely on the skateboard.
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-Changed a few of the jumps on the arm
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As for theme, the title speaks for itself. There isn't really another way to describe what the build is about, its someone skateboarding into a wall. Maybe it would just fit into the "other" category on Shinx's parkour list or something

/plot v Cashisgr8 3

~65 Jumps, 6 Checkpoints

I still think its a funny build
 

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Hello Cash,

I am sorry to inform you that this course is being rejected. The parkour is a lot better than before and definitely more varied. Good job on that! It is still slightly confusing though. However, the build was one of my previous rejection reasons and is still the reason now. Yes, the build may be considered humorous. However, the build could be better detailed and could have been improved.

Thank you for submitting this course! :D
If you have any questions, you may DM me on here, in game, or on discord! :D

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)
 
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