Rejected Improved version of Toxic Explosion - Resubmission

[Marjo03]

Username: Marjo03
Map name: Toxic explosion
Difficulty: Medium
Plot: /plot h marjo03 01
Jumps: 32
Note: I know that some floating bits make it look messy, but I thought it would match the theme "Explosion".
Screenshots:

http://imgur.com/a/9K5Mg8T

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Marjo03,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Marjo03,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The build has improved a bit, but the main rock (or inner object) looks a bit off; I would try to change the color scheme. Since we do have another map relating to toxic things already, make sure this build stands out.
The parkour is still a bit repetitive in places, with the fences at the start being an example. Make sure you have better variety throughout your whole map!

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!