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Loading Status...Rejected Industrial takeover - Medium/Hard built by Cow_Claw and Bobb75
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Hello Cow_Claw and Bobb75,
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around factories (AbandonedFactory, WonkaFactory). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build is very boxy and doesn't really resemble a factory. Next time try considering adding extra detail to further create a better factory look.
The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a hard map, so good job on that! Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around factories (AbandonedFactory, WonkaFactory). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build is very boxy and doesn't really resemble a factory. Next time try considering adding extra detail to further create a better factory look.
The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a hard map, so good job on that! Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
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