Rejected Inside (Insane )

[zzykrkv]

Yo its me speaking on behalf of DaWomby because he lost his access to minecraft after being unable to migrate his account. Hes entrusted me to keep working on the level.

I gave the level some heavy nerfs and some slight polish so yea, hopefully it comes through this time. what is this the 5th submission?

Creators: DaWomby, Pax_Australis, Kvoidcoconut, Daaronaaronax
Difficulty: Insane
Visit dawombys second plot

 

[DaWomboss]

ATTEMPT 5 BABYYYY

 

[k_rissy]

Hello zzykrkv, DaWomby, Pax_Australis, Kvoidcoconut, Daaronaaronax ,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed. This may take time, so please be patient!

 

[k_rissy]

Hello,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected. We do notice some slight improvement, but overall there are too many fixes needed to justify reviewing. I will list specific changes required down below.

Spoiler: Build

The trees at the start of the map/segments between the leaves need to be fixed.

Spoiler: Parkour

If there is no specific feedback, the jump just needs to be nerfed as a whole.

Spoiler: Checkpoint 1

Momentum isn't good here

Spoiler: Checkpoint 2

Make this jump failsafe or nerf the blockage

Spoiler: Checkpoint 3

Spoiler: Checkpoint 4

Slab makes it a bit hard to see the jump/also messes up momentum

Better momentum setup here

Spoiler: Checkpoint 5

Spoiler: Checkpoint 6

Nerf blockage here.

Spoiler: Checkpoint 7

Checkpoint 8 is fine

Spoiler: Checkpoint 9

Nerf blockage here

needs a clearer path+ jump to iron bar nerfed

Spoiler: Checkpoint 10

Extend slime landing

Spoiler: Checkpoint 11

Make this jump failsafe

Spoiler: Checkpoint 12

Spoiler: Checkpoint 13

Spoiler: Checkpoint 14

Spoiler: Checkpoint 15

Extend landing here

Spoiler: Checkpoint 16

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!