Rejected Is this loss? Medium map

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  • Spectromaniac
  • "Is this loss"
  • /plot teleport spectromaniac 1
  • Medium
It won't let me add images for some reason and i've been trying for like a day so idk what to do about that.
 

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The map is based around a 2d build, which is an immediate red flag. On top of that the colour scheme was very monotone and the build was quite boring. Other then that the parkour was quite fun and the parkour was quite varied. Good luck!

Just to clarify, this is NOT a final response but just my opinion ;D
 
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The map is based around a 2d build, which is an immediate red flag. On top of that the colour scheme was very monotone and the build was quite boring. Other then that the parkour was quite fun and the parkour was quite varied. Good luck!

Just to clarify, this is NOT a final response but just my opinion ;D
I'll edit accordingly to your feedback, thanks!
 

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Hoi spectromaniac,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is.. interesting ? After be sure your theme is interesting for the build ! Speaking of the build, it's not really good, it's pretty flat and unattractive, try to add more detail on your build, but it's probably impossible because of the theme sadly.. The parkour could be better, even if you tried to add some variety, I still think it's pretty repetitive, mostly at the start, I also think the first part could be shorter, so you have less floating jumps.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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