Rejected JapaneseCuisine - Medium Map

[Lofi]

• Username: GreasyController
• Map Name: JapaneseCuisine
• Photos of your parkour:
  
  
  
  
  
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: /plot v GreasyController 1
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane): Medium
• Number of jumps: 56-58

 

[ampsterdam]

wohoo go greasy

 

[IPattyI]

Hey GreasyController,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: Although we have our fair share of food-related maps and a cup ramen map, I think that this map does have original aspects in it as no one has made a map that's centered on Japanese cuisine. So, the theme is original in that regard.
• Build: Personally, I don't think the build was executed very well. There's a lot of areas you can improve on. For starters, the portrayal of the theme was barely satisfactory. You just built a piece of sushi and a ramen cup with chopsticks. Their execution evidences the minor part they have on the map: they're just two unimportant builds amongst a bunch of parkour. Then, regarding the actual execution of the build components themselves, they were pretty mediocre. Like, you have to give me more than this. Detail them more, shape them better, they barely look like what they're supposed to be. Lastly, you have to deal with the floating parkour issue. There are just too many blocks floating around, hindering the build's attractiveness by quite a lot.
• Parkour: The parkour's length and difficulty was suitable for the medium difficulty. But, I found it to be quite boring to do. Why? Well, you used a lot of the same jumps/blocks either consecutively or throughout your map. For example, not ot only are there a lot of ladders throughout the map, but there was also a solely-ladder jump segment. These kinds of things make the parkour very unenjoyable. You need to be more creative, don't be afraid to use a variety of blocks/jumps in your parkour!

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!