Hello 14204,
I regret to inform you that your map is being
rejected.
The theme is
unoriginal, as we already have a few maps based on a "Journey" theme (
UpwardsJourney,
AdventureInHistory.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here and clicking the google doc in the thread:
https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is
quite messy with the structures being so spread apart, so
try only having a few structures and group them closer together. Also
ensure that your build(s) have plenty of detail!
The parkour has some different blocks used, but often feels
repetitive, so
please be sure to incorporate different types of jumps throughout your entire map! The length of the course is
too long for an easy or medium (Easy maps typically have around 20-40 jumps, mediums have 40-60.)
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!