Rejected jungle jump and run

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Name:jungle jump and run
builders: einkruemel09
:difficulty easy 19%
my plot #1
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you and your 2 friends are on an expedition to a jungle island at the base camp you are doing research for the undiscoverd animal that you want to catch
after 3 days your mates are still not back. you are tring to find them

can you do the parkour to the end to leave from the island and can u find ur friends?
 

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Hey einkruemel09! Unfortunately, your map is being rejected. Here's why;

The theme of your map is unoriginal, as we already have many jungle and forest themed maps (Woods, Trees). When creating a map, be sure to choose a unique theme! A list of all previously used themes can be found here!

The build is also a problem; outside of the bundle of trees at the start, there is no main build. And sure, whilst those trees look alright, it doesn't do enough for the map. When you create a map, be sure to center it around one big, attractive main build!

The parkour, whilst fitting the difficulty, felt almost too easy. It was short and almost felt like walking to the end. It also did not have much variation in jump placement. When you make a map, be sure to vary your parkour and get creative with it!

Good luck in your future submissions! [Lofi]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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