Rejected Kirby hard by Gabush

[Gabush]

a small but difficult Map about Kirby
/plot visit Gabush
Level: Hard
31 jumps

 

[Nathanpls]

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[Udun]

Unoriginal theme, build is sorta 3D pixel art, I like the effort, but from me it’s a -1

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Gabush,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there is already a kirby themed map. (Kirby - Hard) I would recommend checking the document linked in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't bad, it is quite simple and small but it is accurate to the character which is good.
The parkour is quite repetitive. You had some original jumps which is good, but it would be great if you could keep up the variation throughout the parkour, as well as experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items, as this will make your map more fun to complete.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.