Hoi Madi and Ryan,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
I don't really have a lot to say, only the parkour and a bit the build got improved, even if the parkour is way more varied, the rest still need to be improved, the build still looks a bit like a pixel art, the parkour is a bit repetitive tho in some part, and the theme (can't really be changed though xD) is still meh.
Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !