Hello Nuldra,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done!
The build is great, and accurate to what you were going for with several details to be seen, well done!
The parkour is the concern with this map. It is very repetitive throughout; so please be sure to incorporate different types of jumps throughout your entire map. You may look at recently accepted maps for examples of these. There is also a bit of an issue with the difficulty; the first checkpoint is extremely lengthy and would need to be adjusted, and the end of the map is a bit confusing, so please try to have a more direct path for players to follow.
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!