Rejected Lanterns and Balloons - Hard

[X_Mystery_Man_X]

Map name: Lanterns and Balloons
Map creator: X_Mystery_Man_X
Map difficulty: Hard
Plot #: /plot v X_Mystery_Man_x 1

# of jumps: 90-100
# of Checkpoints: 5

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[k_rissy]

Hello X_Mystery_Man_X,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is unoriginal as we already have many maps based around balloons (Balloons, BalloonsToTheSun, AirBalloon). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here (https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/) to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The build of your parkour is also a problem. The main build is accurate for what you are trying to do but gets lost in the mist of floating parkour, which is no longer accepted on ManaCube. The theme is hard to create a map for, but next time try considering making one main build with lots of detail around.
The parkour of your build fits the difficulty for a hard map so good job on that. The length is far too long through, try only having around 60-80 jumps rather than 108. The parkour is mostly floating, which isn’t accepted anymore, try incorporating your parkour into the build. Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps. Try spreading the parkour out rather than making sections. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like chests, water, glass panes, brewing stands, etc.[Elly]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina