Rejected Last Hall - Medium

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Map creator: jaimito0212
Map name: Last Hall
Plot home: /plot home jaimito0212 1
Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane): Medium
Number of Checkpoints: 3
Number of jumps (Optional): 59 jumps
Theme: Undertale
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Hello jaimito0212,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have an Undertale map with Sans as the main focus (Sans.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is somewhat accurate to what you were going for. However, if you were going for the "Last Hall," I would recommend building the inside structure as the main build, as opposed to primarily focusing on Sans.
The parkour is a bit repetitive in certain spots. Try to incorporate different types of jumps throughout the entire map! This may include: lava, cake, flowerpots, heads, and many more different types! This course seems like it is better suited for the hard difficulty, based on the length. However, the jumps are a bit easy.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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