Rejected Lava escape - hard

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Names - unspeakable_josh,xxblack,DarthRyan13,Firerocket33
map name - Lava escape
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difficulty - expert
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jumps - 94
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Hello unspeakable_josh, xxblack, DarthRyan13, and Firerocket33,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is unoriginal as there are already maps centered around lava on the server. Try to have a more specific theme that is more recognizable to players. Make sure to check with the map list here before choosing a theme.
For the build it lacked a lot of shape (very boxy), try to make a build that has more shape and gives the parkour more life. This just goes back to the theme you chose. It is hard to make a creative and unique build for the theme you chose so you might want to consider changing your theme which can better fit a big build.
Your parkour was well integrated into your build so good job with that. The parkour had consistent difficulty and length so good job with that but it fit more into the medium/hard difficulty not expert. Try to also add more variation to the jumps and use other blocks besides full blocks to create even more types of jumps.[Jacob]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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