Rejected LavaMines - Easy

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LavaMines made by JustLava. this is not my first time making a map but all the rest of mine have been declined so i put a little more effort into this one. If there is anything wrong or anything i need to fix please tell me.
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Made by: JustLava
Name: LavaMines
ID: 34;124 or /plot tp JustLava 1
Difficulty: Easy
Jumps: 20
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The parkour looks too repetitive, try using other blocks as well as square blocks.

The amount of jumps are okay for a easy map, personally I would go for 25-30 but that’s just me hehe.

I’ve seen many volcano maps all over parkour so unfortunately I don’t think this is an original theme.

P.s I am no map judge, this is only my opinion
 

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Hello JustLava,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have a few lava maps (LavaCavern, DeathMountain.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here.
The build is a bit plain, so make sure that you add more details throughout by using other types of blocks and making sure it is accurate to your theme.
The parkour is very repetitive throughout with glass jumps, so make sure you incorporate other jump styles throughout your entire map! This may include; lava, vines, heads, trapdoors, flower pots, and many more different types of jumps depending on your theme and build! The parkour is also a bit confusing; there are no signs to indicate where to go except the very end, so make sure that you have plenty of directional indicators (signs/heads) to help players know where to go!

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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