Rejected Little cave - Medium

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Hayleyx

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Hello _Sp3ctre & xXninjaofspyXx,

I regret to inform you that your map has been rejected.

The theme is unoriginal as we already have maps based around caves [LavaCavern, UnusualCave, AbandonedCave]. Please look at all our current maps here to get an idea of what would be an original idea c;

With regards to your build, the cave itself has some good detail; however, the rest of it does need some more detail and depth (the sun/plane). I would suggest building a larger main build so that you have more room to base your parkour around the cave instead of pathing the parkour up the landscape as it does look slightly messy.

Unfortunately, your parkour is too difficult for a medium map. The difficulty is inconsistent throughout, some jumps are too hard such as the double neo. Your checkpoint placement makes your map harder too. There are no checkpoints in the cave so you get sent back to the start of the map if you fall. You do have some variance to your map which is great! Add more variance such as heads, lava, brewing stands, fences (without carpets), etc to make the parkour more enjoyable!

We hope to see more maps from you in the future >.<
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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