Rejected Living On Edge (Medium) Re-submission

[Quasar_Blitz]

Username: Quasar_Blitz

Plot Name: Living On Edge

Plot: /plot visit Quasar_Blitz

Difficulty: Medium

Jumps: ~70

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a +0

Positives:

• Good looking builds
• Good jump variation

Negatives:

• The parkour up the tree is very uninspired and boring
• Too many floating jumps
• Unoriginal theme
• Way too many jumps for a medium level

Suggestions:

• Make the jumps harder to make it a hard map, or remove jumps to make it a medium map
• Improve the parkour on the tree
• Remove most of the floating parkour and instead build the parkour mostly connected to the main build

Good luck!

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Quasar_Blitz,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we have several maps centered around trees already (TallTrees, Trees.)
The build is good, with some details (especially near the top,) so good job on that! However, it does appear a bit messy in certain areas.
The parkour is the main concern. It is very confusing in certain areas, and I often didn't know where to go. Try adding more signs to lead players in the right direction. There are also quite a few floating jumps (jumps that aren't attached to the build) which can make the parkour look messy. The map is also too long for the medium difficulty. I would either reduce the amount of jumps or buff the jumps so they fit the hard difficulty. However, there was a decent variety in jumps, so good job on that!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina