Rejected LonLonMilk - Easy

[Lofi]

Username: GreasyController
Builder: GreasyController
Map name: LonLonMilk
Difficulty: Easy
Number of jumps: 25
The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: /plot v GreasyController 10
Photos of your Parkour:

 

[k_rissy]

Hello GreasyController,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; this means I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among the map judges. This may take time, so please be patient! This thread will now be closed from public responses.

Have a nice day,
Kristina

 

[k_rissy]

Hello GreasyController,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done.
The build and parkour are both the main concerns, and for that I will combine them into one section. Both are quite plain/mediocre in appearance. I feel there could be more details to be seen, as well as maybe expanding the build a bit. The parkour felt a bit repetitive, so be sure to use different types of jumps throughout your entire map. The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps did fit the easy difficulty!

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina