Hello Dinozaw,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, and the build is good. It is accurate to the theme, and has some nice details, as well as the theme and build overall being quite cute.
The parkour is quite repetitive. Majority of the jumps were normal blocks, heads and ladders. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The jumps are in the build, but it does feel a bit floaty, considering a lot of the jumps are floating above the build. I do understand it's a bit difficult with the nature of the build, but try to incorporate the jumps into the build a bit more.
The length and difficulty are good for a medium map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.