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Hello Zobroz and Sky_ray ,
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is original as we do not have any maps based on Lucille, so good job on that!
The BUILD of your map is good. There is great detailing and texture to the build and replicates what you tended to build. Only thing I recommend is possibly adding more of the details that make the bat a lucille rather than just a regular baseball bat. Although the build is good, the floating parkour takes away from the build. Put the parkour on the build instead of floating around the build so it looks less messy and more put together.
The PARKOUR fits the length of a hard map but seems to be a medium map from the ending. The parkour is too hard for a medium map. Jumps such as the double neo and cross-neo should not be in a medium map at all, but rather an expert. Try to keep the jumps at a medium difficulty. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, ladders and ice. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. The parkour is very repetitive due to the lack of variance.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future. [Hayley]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555.
Have a great day,
Elly
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is original as we do not have any maps based on Lucille, so good job on that!
The BUILD of your map is good. There is great detailing and texture to the build and replicates what you tended to build. Only thing I recommend is possibly adding more of the details that make the bat a lucille rather than just a regular baseball bat. Although the build is good, the floating parkour takes away from the build. Put the parkour on the build instead of floating around the build so it looks less messy and more put together.
The PARKOUR fits the length of a hard map but seems to be a medium map from the ending. The parkour is too hard for a medium map. Jumps such as the double neo and cross-neo should not be in a medium map at all, but rather an expert. Try to keep the jumps at a medium difficulty. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, ladders and ice. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. The parkour is very repetitive due to the lack of variance.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future. [Hayley]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555.
Have a great day,
Elly
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