Rejected Map creation - TempleRitual

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iMonkey

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TempleRitual
Difficulty - Expert
95 Jumps
10 Checkpoints
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-1 theme is unoriginal. build could be better and jumps look repetitive.
 

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Hoi iMonkey,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is not that original, since there is already some "Temple" maps (Temple), but you build it in an original way, so I guess there is still some originality. The build is not really good, the chains looks decent to be honest, but the main problem is the messyness, there is a LOT of floating blocks, try to lower the amount of floating blocks, with adding the parkour on/in the build for example (Like you did in the first part). The parkour could be better, it's a bit varied, the first part still feel repetitive tho, and the parkour was a bit confusing, the amount of invisible blocks is also not really useful, and there is an impossible jump here : http://prntscr.com/muox95

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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