Rejected map sub

[LlamapowerYt]

map the llama
creater LlamapowerYT
warp /plot h LlamapowerYT 2
Difficulty hard
number of jumps 60

 

[RobindeBest4]

I like the theme and the build looks funny, but the difficulty is easy, not hard

 

[ComradeOlaf]

Hi!
Sadly there already exists a map with a llama theme (/log llamas) :/ Make sure to check if the theme youre going for is taken already before making maps to avoid this happening again.
Also remember to have sufficient jump variety in your maps, right now it mostly consits of ladder jumps. Try using different blocks like slimes, pots, water, fences, vines etc.. I suggest you take a look at some new maps to get an idea of what that looks like.

I hope this is helpful to you!

 

[sapqhire]

Hello LlamapowerYT,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there is already a llama map. (Llama - Hard) In the future, refer to the document linked in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't great, it feels quite flat and blocky. In the future try to add a bit more detail and shaping to the build to make it more attractive.
The parkour is very repetitive as it's mainly ladders and heads. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when building parkour, as well as finding new ways to utilise these, this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
Here is an article with some map making tips - https://manacube.wiki/parkour/making-maps/parkour-maps
The length is good for a hard map, and the difficulty is good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.