Rejected Map Submission - Brown Bridges - Medium Map

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Brown Bridges is a medium parkour map containing:

37 Jumps,

2 Checkpoints,

And quite a bit of decoration.

This is only my second submission and if there is anything wrong with it, you can just point it out. There is always room for improvement.

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Plot ID: 131:111 or /plot visit Fladan
 

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Hello Fladan!
I regret to inform you that your map has been rejected!

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as there is already bridge themed maps on ManaCube. Try to make a theme more specific from current ones to be unique!

The BUILD of your map is lacking in detail and depth. When making a map, try and incorporate more features so that its appealing to play on!

The PARKOUR of your map is mainly floating, which makes the map look messy. The length fits more of an easy map and the difficulty is inconsistent, with some jumps not being possible or fit for a medium, try to balance this out! Lastly, many of the jumps were unvaried or repetitive, try and avoid this by using more variation to make your parkour more fun to play on!

Thank you for your submission and we hope to see more submissions from you in the future, take care! [Crisp]
Any questions at all, you can reach me on my discord which you can find below.
- Jash
 
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