Rejected Map submission - Iron

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Username: Sir_marshall1504
Map name: Iron
Płot ID: 35;117
Difficulty: medium
Number of jumps: 56
 

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~I am not a map judge so my opinion won't change the outcome of the submission~

In terms of the submission format I would suggest having you plot number for example /plot v Sir_marshell1504 1 to make it easier for the mods to find your plot!

The build is unoriginal as there are lots of mountain/mine/cave maps already accepted so I suggest you take some time to check the map Idea is original! To do this do /log {Your theme} to see if there are any maps with the same theme.

The build is another issue as there should be a main build to your theme which in this case there isn't a main build just some parkour on iron blocks.

The parkour is another issue, though the iron blocks fit the theme they are floating in space which is not what the map judges look for. I would suggest building it against your main build and picking a variety of blocks that blend into your build, try and avoid any floating parkour.

Please take this feedback into consideration remember my opinion isn't final in terms of you map being accepted!
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Thanks for advices, it is my first map so every advice is great. I'll try to implement your thoughts into map :)
 

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Hello Sir_Marshall1504,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is unoriginal as we already have many maps based around a cave (AbandonedCave, GoldMine, SaltMines). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here (https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/) to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The build of your parkour is also a problem. The build is mostly just plain floating islands with parkour built to look like a cave, which is no longer accepted on ManaCube. Next time try making one main build with lots of details!
The parkour of your build fits the difficulty and length for a medium map so good job on that. With that said, the parkour is lacking variety, all that is there are regular jumps, fences and ladders. Try adding more jumps with unique blocks like chests, water, glass panes, brewing stands, etc.[Elly[

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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