Hello BinoTheRaven,
I regret to inform you that your map is being
rejected.
The theme of your map is
unoriginal as we already have a map based around a minecart (
MineCartRider). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here (
https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/) to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The build of your parkour is also a problem. The main build is
accurate to what you are trying to go for but is pretty
plain and has a lot of floating parkour. Next time
try considering making one main build with lots of detail around the build.
The parkour of your build
fits the difficulty for a medium map so good job on that. The length is
far too long through,
try only having around 40-60 jumps rather than over 100. You parkour has
some variance, but most of it is in clumps.
Try spreading the parkour out rather than making sections. To add more variance,
try adding more jumps with unique blocks like chests, water, glass panes, brewing stands, etc.
[Elly]
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina