Rejected (Map Submission) Requiem Arrow

[KingFuff]

Difficulty - Easy/Medium
Plot ID: -91;87
Map Maker World
Creator - King_Fuff
Tester - Athany

I am once again submitting a JoJo's Bizarre Adventure themed map because there are none.

I took the first screenshot from within a neighboring plot, so that's why it says the creator is "Flip_Knife"

As you can see in the last screenshot, I built the map on the completely wrong side of the plot. When you visit the plot, simply just fly to the other side.

 

[Proteges]

Hey there, before going ahead with your map submission review I'd like to inform you that I'm only giving you my personal opinion/feedback on your parkour map submission and my personal feedback will certainly not affect your parkour map submission in the slightest, I recommend that you take in my feedback to improve your submission if there are any flaws, you don't need to and you're free to ignore me but anyhow, before going ahead I'd like to mention that I'm a Moderator not a Map Judge so this is just my personal opinion and I am not accepting or denying your parkour map as this is only my personal opinion.

Parkour theme/design: So firstly for the theme, I mean I do know a parkour map called ArrowPK but that's got different stuff included and doesn't really look like yours from my experience I'm pretty sure your theme is original which is great to see, for the detail, you did a pretty good job in my opinion, it certainly looks like an arrowhead so good job, and as it is kind of a JoJo theme I think it's original, good taste though!

Parkour variety/difficulty: So firstly the difficulty, for an easy/medium map I'd say that it certainly matches the difficulty with the number of jumps on your parkour submission, for the parkour variety, your parkour kind of seems like it's in sections, like a section of Ice parkour, fence jumps, etc I'd suggest making it more natural and make the jumps more mixed for a better result, in my opinion, I'd also suggest adding more interesting and unique parkour jumps as that would make your map more interesting, for example, vine jumps, chest/bed jumps, head hitters, flower pot jumps, etc. Your parkour is kind of a little simple, I'd like to point out, maybe making a possible 1 block neo or some harder jumps - head hitters, etc.

Good luck!

 

[k_rissy]

Hello King_Fuff,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we currently don't have any maps relating to JoJo's Bizarre Adventure, so good job on that!
The build is accurate to the original design you were going for, and there is quite a bit of block variety used throughout, as well as several details. I can tell that you put some effort into this!
The parkour is the main concern. There is some variety throughout, but it is quite repetitive in certain sections, so just try to make sure that the jumps are varied throughout the whole map. The parkour is also a bit confusing in certain spots; I do realize that you included directional signs already, so just try to make the path more direct (I know the build presents a challenge when it comes to this.) The difficulty of the jumps is good for a medium map; however, it does feel a bit lengthy.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina