Hello sou_nobbao,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is confusing, and I am unsure of what you were going for.
The builds are both a bit plain, as they are solid cylinders/cubes. Try to give your builds more shape, and also make them the main focus of the map. Right now, the main builds are too far apart.
The parkour is repetitive throughout with simple wood jumps. Try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! This may include; cactus, vines, water, lava, cake, flower pots, and many more different types of jumps! The parkour is also mostly floating (meaning it isn't attached to the build) which makes it look messy. The length of the parkour and difficulty are both better suited for the easy difficulty.
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina